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Quarter 1: Creation of Identity & Social Conformity

1. I want to use more transitions to make my writing flow better.

2. I will stop using crutches to sound more sure of myself and seem more academic.

3. I will stop using a big long quote without taking the irrelevant pieces out of it.

Q1 Writing goals

sElf evaluation

I did pretty well with meeting my goals that I set at the beginning of the quarter. I showed that I can use transitions in my writing. I also learned to avoid crutches and using long quotes with irrelevant pieces.

My writing could be represented by a tree because everything is connected for a reason (branches of the tree).  It all leads back to the promise or thesis (trunk of the tree)

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